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Warning: Mature Content. For 18 years of age, and up. Master of the Universe by Snowqueens Icedragon. Fifty Shades of Fucked Up. Come I Want To Show. Posts about Master of the Universe written by twilightcupcake. twilight · Tagged with desktop, E.L. James, fanfiction, iPad, iphone, MotU, PDF, quiz, wallpaper. To ask other readers questions about Master of the Universe, please sign up. .. That book is another LAZY attempt for anesi.info to produce a book that you.
Featured TV. Or at least ask professional help in reworking the story. Also, it's extremely improbable that such deep rooted wounds would get cured by someone just passing by. My curiosity is piqued. Contents [ show ]. Calling her a ugly middelaged twat just makes you look like a huge asshole. I don't really know; I've never tea read fanfic before.
I get it that the average woman reading a romance novel should be able to empathize with the main character and root for her because if she can find everlasting happiness with Mr. Perfect, then so can the reader. But either you do that, and you really give an appropriate rendition of a Mr. Perfect, or you chose to make your heroine actually beautiful, with men dropping at her feet at every turn, and Mr.
Perfect being in awe of her beauty. You can't have it both ways, because a beautiful girl who keeps telling us she's actually not that good looking is frankly unbearable. Especially if she looks down on any single other woman in her life for being good-looking, wearing make-up, having an interesting hairdo, or, Heaven forbid!
Edward is Edward.
Rich and influential an not afraid to use his power to reach his means. Stalkerish and controlling. This translate to him not having any real relationship with women, other than a working one, based on a non-enforceable contract and a NDA, for sure, but a work relationship nonetheless.
The perks for the woman is that she gets to be ordered around, which turns her on, if she's into the lifestyle, and get lots of expensive presents, without really having to commit on any kind of emotional level for periods of three months at a time. If she grows attached and he dumps her, it'll just be like any other break up and she'll adjust to it and move on it takes a subsequent boyfriend dying on her, to throw one of the past subs over the edge and trying to get back at Edward.
Bella is therefore the first woman to actually catch Edward's interest in the romantic sense, much as Edward is Bella's first everything. It's the usual teenage love story, and the change of setting is only an excuse to have the character move more freely around without having to explain themselves to their parents.
I don't really want to rehash all that, even though I wholly agree with most of what is being said in that regard. The only BDSM characters in the story are, possibly, Edward's ex subs and, maybe, Irina, since we don't know enough of her backstory to judge whether she really is into to lifestyle of is she's just a rapist with a penchant for violence. Edward is not. He's not into BDSM for the sexual gratification and for the playful aspect of it.
He's into BDSM because that's the only outlet he found for his pathological need for control and his hardly suppressed rage at life, at himself, and at brunettes.
He finds some sort of short-term psychological release in beating up brunettes which remind him of his biological mother, and then he fucks them for good measure, since that's what his mother ever did: Edward is basically an extremely disturbed person, who should be in real therapy.
Also, it's extremely improbable that such deep rooted wounds would get cured by someone just passing by. That's science-fiction of the highest degree, not romance. Real anger has no place in BDSM, as does self-loathing. The only thing of any real interest of the whole ff is actually Edward's backstory, even though it hardly adds up to the rest of his bio, within the ff.
Some good writer should pick up the story of an abused child and tell his long road to health and love from his point of view. And possibly make it believable. As it is, I can't help but find it impossible to reconcile the poor, hungry, beat up child, who spent four days with his mom's corpse and could find emotional release only when he was later raped by a BDSM enthusiast, with the adopted son of a loving, high-class family, with a M.
Had Edward been left to his own devices, I might buy the fact that he'd be so messed up about his past in his late twenties. But somehow, I find it highly improbable that his loving and educated family never did anything even remotely useful to help him. So much that they'd actually despair of his anger-management issues at 15 and never bothered to investigate their sudden disappearance. As with Bella's characterization: You can't have it both ways. And since this is a ff, and you want to keep the characters as true to the original as possible, if you can't make it work, find some other plot.
Or give up. Or keep is as it is, but when someone approaches you about changing the names and publishing your story, refuse.
Or at least ask professional help in reworking the story. Let's face it: But I wouldn't be reviewing this if it had just remained a ff actually, I wouldn't even have read it. It's the fact that these unrealistic characters and improbable plot were barely questioned before the names were changed and the story was published as original that's infuriating. Once the book supposedly became it's own story, there was no need to keep Edward's parents faithful to SMeyer's Esmee and Carlisle.
It doesn't work. At all. View 2 comments. May 28, Lilian rated it it was amazing Shelves: I am glad I haven't started to read fifty shades of grey yet. I am in love with this original version. With Edward and Bella I have fallen for their story in twilight saga, and with master of the universe I have fallen in love with them all over again.
It's been quite a while since I have picked up a book and been so into that I have read it well into the night and gone to bed at 4 am. I love the whole alternate universe. It isn't about mystical creature, but about true life scenarios that c I am glad I haven't started to read fifty shades of grey yet. It isn't about mystical creature, but about true life scenarios that cause you to stop and think about life in general.
Granted there is a lot of sex, but when you get pass that part and you look at how two people will go to any length to keep that person happy. Master of Universe is a great story to read. View all 29 comments. Jun 27, Theresa Ann rated it it was ok Shelves: This is the Twilight fan fiction that Fifty Shades of Grey is based on. Actually it's word for word except for the name changes from Edward and Bella to Christian and Ana. You can find this FREE fan fiction at http: Inside is also "Christian's" point of view, now other wise known as the book "Grey.
James to produce a book that you are all paying millions of dollars to read. View all 6 comments. I find that Amusing might be a word for it. May 08, Tammy rated it really liked it.
Okay so I'm a little biased lol. I have read 50 Shades as well, but I do enjoyed her thought processes. Wishing I did not have the work schedule I do or low funds to get to Chicago 10 days ago. I would really like to get to meet this author.
Though I think she still seems amazed at all the attention her little trilogy of books have received, I am not surprised. I am in awe of her ability to put such detail into wr Okay so I'm a little biased lol. I am in awe of her ability to put such detail into writing, I was totally able to create a quite thorough picture in my head, I think she author would be an interesting and fun person to know.
Some of the commentary mentioned at the end of each chapter brought thoughts of book club to mind for me. I think after finishing this story in its original format, I could really use a nice glass of Moscato My curiosity is piqued. Nov 11, Cheryl Roman rated it it was amazing. I completely loved the process of reading this book! Of course it's not edited! She wrote it on line, chapter by chapter and waited for comments by readers.
I loved the suspense of waiting for the next chapter and being involved with the process of these fantastic characters not to mention an unknown author come to life. I loved reading Fifty Shades later but I will always be loyal to the original. Jul 25, Nicole Howard marked it as to-read. I can't find this book! He asks her what she would recommend for hiking; she suggests non-denim pants, because jeans will chafe if wet and he'll lose body heat. In Fifty Shades: Clayton's is a hardware store.
Ana helps Christian find cable ties, rope, and masking tape.
He asks her what she would recommend for a DIY-er, and she suggests coveralls so that he doesn't ruin his clothes with paint. Taylor and Mrs. Jones are not married in the epilogue of MotU. Bella was in labor a whopping 36 hours, compared to Ana's 15 hours of labor. Sophie was 12 in MotU's epilogue, but 10 in the Fifty Shades epilogue.
Sign In Don't have an account? Start a Wiki. A great story to read. With all the 50 shades hype I thought I would try this book. Its brilliant - loved the plot and how the storyline developed. There are a few surprises. I can see the raw edge of it all. If I had to describe it - it would fall under 'Bridget Jones girly book with a bit more of an edge' Fantastic read cannot fault it!!!
Loved it better than 50 Shades only because it has Edward and Bella; I fell in love with them in the Twilight series, so I absolutely loved them here, it was exiting. I must said I'm disappointed I didn't read this one first Or maybe not; I do tend to like having the best for last, and, to me, this is the best one.
That's when I realized I had no way of getting a copy of the book in English and for free for a while. Not to mention, relying on a man with money and power is the least safe position to put yourself in.
Ladies please be careful who you play with. It's not even rapey lol. Christian didn't even fuck her ass - big letdown. Just goes to show that you can do whatever you put your mind to, even if most people seem to think it's mediocre or plain fucking bizarre.
There's thousands of people on fanfiction.
Some of it involves original characters, but most is based off the fandoms the authors are in. I could go write a so-called intense sex story right now with a less-than-decent plot based off one of my fandoms, then switch all the names after I'm done with it, and attempt to turn it into a best seller.
Not as easy as it sounds though, because it's probably become all too common after Snowqueens Icedragon did it. Supposedly being able to put sex into words is considered a talent nowadays, because we're just sick of the same old visual pornography. Might as well offer some kind of curriculum in a college writing course considering they teach you crap you're most likely not going to use in your daily life.
A real kudos to you, E. This is coming from someone whose mother couldn't even get through the book because she lost interest less than halfway through. I agree with you completely. The books were some of the worst I have ever read, along with the twilight saga. And I was a champ and finished both of those series, but good lord was it painful.